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2016上海中考英语作文评分标准
篇一：2016上海中考作文评分
上海中考必读：英语老师解密中考英语作文评分标准
中考英语作文难不难?其实不难，大部分同学都能得到12分以上，13、14分也是平常，但是要想得到15分甚至以上，就难上加难了。到底什么样的作文能得到16分以上?经过和中考命题组和阅卷组老师的交流，我们对中考英语作文评分标准做出了更深的理解。
一、中考英语写作的概述
关于体裁，本文包含记叙文和议论文两种最容易考到的类型，其他一些文体也有可能会综合涉及。
关于题材，同学们的反应可谓是“几家欢喜几家愁”。上海中考写作也有自己的特色：一般围绕着“生活化、学校化”来考察。近几年，考试题目实际上是一些比较贴近中学生活，为中学生能够的认识能力、生活经历所能驾驭的问题。比如：
2009年题目“I Want to Do something for my School”(我想为学校做的一件事)
2010年题目“Im Proud of myself”(我为自己感到自豪)
2011年题目“I am a member of_____”(我是?的一员)
2012年题目“A letter to Joe”(给Joe的一封建议信)
2013年题目“How to protect myself”(如何保护自己)
2014年题目“The time next year”(明年此时)
2015年题目“I want to invent ____”(我想要发明___)
你对于在中考英语写作中拿高分有把握吗?实际考试中，许多学生却常常有“无话可说”的感觉。那要如何我们才能克服这种无话的状态，取得高分呢?归根到底这是一个英语基本功——单词、短语和句型的问题。
英语作文的前提条件是掌握了一定量的词汇、语法及体裁、题材等方面的知识。学生如果想要在写作方面有本质上的提升，必须进行多次的写作练习。因此，必须合理地设置训练步骤，遵循从初级到高级，从简单到复杂的原则去练习，经过一段写作实践之后，写作水平一定会有大幅度的提高。
二、中考英语写作的评分标准
1、老师拿到的标准
写作水平的高低和文章的好坏，分数是最直接的评分标准，也是考生们最关心的。但是多少考生真正透彻知道中考英语写作的评分标准?什么样的文章才是阅卷老师眼中的好文章?
评分标准：
整篇作文满分20分，其中内容8分，语言8分，结构4分。
内容贴切，句子流畅，用语准确，加整体印象分1分。
不满60个词，少1——5个词扣0.5分，6——10个词扣1分。所有给出问题涉及的三项内容，每少一项扣3分。
每个拼写，大小写，标点符号等错误扣0.5分;同一的拼写错误不重复扣分，扣分总和不超过2分。
语法错误每项扣1分，同一错误不重复扣分，扣分总和不超过2分。
2、老师想看到的标准
语言(8分)：词——固定搭配、高频重点词汇;
句——复杂句(各种从句)、特殊句型、正确的句子!内容(8分)：(总、分)论点、论据支持句;
简洁、切合主题的记叙内容。
结构(4分)：语言结构——句子重点突出、内容清晰;
内容结构——论点、论据以及记叙之间的逻辑关系;句数控制——对于相对内容的句数掌握;
亮点、出彩点——排比、拟人、谚语、成语、押韵等
篇二：2016年上海中考英语真题试卷和解析
2016上海市初中毕业统一学业考试试题
Phonetics, Grammar and Vocabulary
II. Choose the best answer(选择最恰当的答案)
（共20分）
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27. The teenagers had _____ good time in the summer camp in their sister school.
A)a B) anC) theD)/
28. When James arrived at the railway station, he tried to look_____ a place to park his car.
A) afterB)at C) up D)for
29. The local community center is open_______ Monday to Sunday.
A)inB) from C)for D) on
30. The retired couple have decided to go to college. It?s time for ______ to begin a new life.
A)they B) them C) their
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An innocent choice for Oji Rider
(14,200&日元)
(12,780&日元)
(10% 折扣)
3.7&(6&评论)
(14,200日元)
(12,780日元)
(10% 折扣)
Rather than saying my age as his uncle, I bought it for myself as a gift that I can wear it safely w...
First time Mesh jacket.My son has come to Thailand 's Parenthesis nice Jacket, but I feel a litt...
Coolness has none to say. Because the fabric is thick and solid, it will prevent the solar radiation...
They were purchase and an exactly good Size about L Size in 177-cm61 kg.
Coolly satisfied, if it ...
172 cm and 70 kg since the Outer of everyday wear also wore LL Size by the form firmly, LL was purch...
It purchases for the short summer of Hokkaido. There are also no logos, such as a rough and road, an...
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An innocent choice for Oji Rider
First time Mesh jacket.My son has come to Thailand 's Parenthesis nice Jacket, but I feel a little embarrassed that kind of thing, so I am looking for a Jacket featuring affordable buying at an affordable price and arrived at this product.We, 168 cm, 68 Kg Oji-san is a body type. It would be M Size for height but it was just right feeling, making it L Size with stomach circumference priority..Sleeve length is long although it was also in Review of other people. But when I was on the Motorcycle I was not particularly concerned.Besides that, I was worried that the Zipper on the sleeve can not be tightly closed. As soon as I thought it was like this, I got it soon...I felt quite hard at the time of purchase, but I wore a few days and I've been totally like a photo.Mesh jacket that can be used as a normal feeling but has a little sense of security, but I do not think so, I think that this is a precious existence in this.===Oh yeah, Mesh jacket So it is better to have a windbreaker according to the temperature.I used a thin Wind Breaker which is not for Motorcycle but can buy at 980 yen, but it was perfect.
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Brembo 40 mm casting caliper
When the item arrives and opened, since the shape of the photograph and the real thing are different, I reviewed the photograph of the order history and the real thing many times again!Since it has no...由&A person of ↑.I do not know..One grade Because it is highYou get a difference from other people..Self-sufficiency. What is Motorcycle?That's not it.With the price like Z7Value will go down if ever...由&I am relieved heavily because I am thick Arm. It might be possible to cut it if it takes time to cut off, but I think that it can not be done easily.Midsummer may be hot, but the cheerfulness of the early summer is comfortable with wind coming in moderately. It is a little because of my body shape Left hands feel tight.It is Type Battery which inject dilute sulfuric acid by yourself.Although I bought not being charged for the first time,There is no particular problem as long as you work safely with care.Just plug th...}