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Jan 15, :46 PM
First TimeHis fingers dance upon my skinAs he begs to be let in,His lips, so warm, tease my earAs his breath dancesThe fear disappears.Bodies close as close can beNot a thing between him and me.His kiss so soft,Tongue hot as fire,Coaxing my own to dance.With him inside,We lose track of time,Our hearts beatThrough the painTo brand new, sweet pleasure.The first time of many,At this point, is done.I could lie here,Forever,In his arms, hot as the sun.
and I had a conversation about how there isn't a lot of good erotic poetry without using certain words and I ended up grabbing a notepad and pen and writing.I know the line 'Not a thing between him and me.' is probably grammatically wrong, but it flows really well like this, so I'm pretty much ignoring if it's wrong.I had a title of First Time already, but First Time fits this piece and that one, so this got an -erotic added to it.I'm not fully sure if it fits erotic, but after looking at the category, yea, this is where it goes. First upload of 2011. First upload in a few months.Please let me know what you think. If I should write more like this (this as in erotic style).No, I'm not putting a warning for maturity thing on this. If I'm given a nice, calm, logical reasoning for why it should have one with no cursing, no mention of certain words, etc. then maybe I will think about it.Update: Jan 24, 2011Holy crap! O.o This is my most faved deviation currently. Thanks folks!
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Awesome poem
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This is really a amazing poem. I hope u like my stories as much as i like your poems.
Thank you. And I'm sure I will.
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