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Shang Rongjie是我国盲人专用计算机方面的一位专家，请根据下面的提示，用英语叙述他的一些情况。1.&他曾就读于国际关系学院（Institute of International Relations）,学习英文，1967年毕业，28岁时不幸眼睛失明。2.&他现在在中国盲文出版社（the China Braille Publishing House）工作。出版社在北京西南部，从他的家到出版社，途中倒两次车。3.&他酷爱阅读，但汉语布莱尔盲文（braille）印刷的书不多，于是收音机就
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Shong Rongjie is an expect in the field of special computers for the blind in our country. He studied English at the Institute of International Relations and graduated in 1967. He was blinded at the age of 28.Shang is now working in the China Braille Publishing House. The publishing house is in the southwest of Beijing, which is two hours’ ride from his home. He walks to the bus stop at 6:30 in the morning and it is usually at about six o’clock in the evening that he arrives back home. On the way to the publishing house, he has to change buses twice.He loves reading, but there is not much printed in Chinese braille. So radio is his best companion. He listens to all sorts of programmes day and night, whenever he is at home.本文比较简单。是一篇人物传记。Shang Rongjie的所有信息都已经给了出来，考生只需要翻译即可，在写作的时候，不要总是使用陈述句，可以变换使用强调句，如：it is usually at about six o’clock in the evening that he arrives back home祈使句等，使文章充满变化。如The publishing house is in the southwest of Beijing, which is two hours’ ride from his home.在选词的时候也要注意选用一些相对有难度的词来提升文章的层次。也要使用合适的连接词如等让各个要点成为整体。点评：本文是一篇人物传记，要求考生根据要点描写出Shang Rongjie的所有信息。要特别注意把所有的要点都包括在内，不能有遗漏，注意使用合适的连接词和高级词汇或者句型来连接全文。
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第一步：审题： 审题是否清楚是一篇书面表达成功与否的关键所在，在整个写作过程中起着决定性作用。审好题会让我们做到“磨刀不误砍柴工”，审题时要做到以下几点： （1）审要求：书面表达试题一般都由“情景”和“要求”两部分构成。“情景”中包括所写材料的目的、对象、时间、地点、内容等，一般在书面表达题的前半部分；而“要求”一般在书面表达的后半部分，以“注意”形式给出，实际上是对考生提出的要求。因而考生对于题目所提供的说明，应认真分析、反复推敲，搞清提出的内容要求，抓住所要表达的信息点。 （2）审文体：高考书面表达的体裁一般有三大类：记叙文、说明文和应用文，具体形式有便条，日记，通知，书信，人物、事情、情景故事的描写，看图说话，缩写，扩写，改写等。审题时要审清文体，注意格式上的不同，避免出错。 （3）审人称：审查书面表达题干中隐含的读者对象和撰写人，即搞清楚此篇文章是“由谁写给谁”的。写稿人是谁一般都已明确指出，给出形式假设环境中的“某人”，如“假设你是李华”，写作时即用第一人称“我”，即李华。而读者对象有时没有明示，要考生自己去进行判断。 （4）审时态：根据情景判断短文需要的主体时态，即搞清楚要写的是什么时候的事，过去的就用过去时。比如日记，是叙述过去发生的事情，自然用过去时；通知多用将来时。 第二步：抓中心，列要点，列出写作提纲： 写作文时，一定要切题，抓住中心，紧扣要点。不要任意发挥，画蛇添足，也不要丢三落四，要点不全。通过对众多提示或图画、图表的观察和分析，获取与写作内容有关的主要信息，并按一定的逻辑顺序排列起来，找出最密切相关的要点，列出写作提纲。 第三步：选词组句：在体裁明确、中心突出、要点清晰的前提下，应该选择自己最熟悉、最有把握的词语、句型，将要点逐条表达出来。表达时应该综合运用所掌握的知识，避开生僻的词汇，并克服母语的干扰，按照英语的习惯方式，用地道的英语表达出来，力求做到语言准确无误。 第四步：连句成篇：根据要点选词组句，然后按照篇章结构连句成篇。在这一过程中要注意选择恰当的表示并列、递进、因果或转折意义的过渡词，把所有要点、句子连接起来，使句与句意思连贯，结构衔接，力求准确生动、条理清楚。 第五步：复查纠错： 通读全文，检查内容是否符合要求，要点是否齐全，格式是否正确，词数是否合乎要求。最主要的是要检查句子是否符合英语习惯，句型是否正确，语法是否正确（包括句子结构、时态、语态、主谓一致等），检查单词是否误写、少写，习语搭配是否得当等，以及字母大小写、标点符号是否正确等，这就要求考生在定稿认真检查，仔细核对，及时发现并改正问题，保证要点齐全，句子完整通顺，力争减少失误。 第六步：书写规范，卷面整洁：书面表达不仅反映在表达内容上，也反映在书面形式上。一定要注意单词拼写正确，书写规范，字迹工整，卷面力求整洁，正确使用标点符号，使别人看起来耳目一新，具有整体美感，从而提高自己的得分档次。
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Christmas is a Christian holiday that celebrates the birth of Jesus Christ. No one knows the exact date of Christ's birth, but most Christians observe Christmas on December 25. On this day, many go to church, where they take part in special religious services. During the Christmas season, they also exchange gifts and decorate their homes with holly, mistletoe, and Christmas trees. The word Christmas comes from Cristes maesse, an early English phrase that means Mass of Christ. The story of Christmas comes chiefly from the Gospels of Saint Luke and Saint Matthew in the New Testament. The history of Christmas dates back over 4000 years. Many of our Christmas traditions were celebrated centuries before the Christ child was born. The 12 days of Christmas, the bright fires, the yule log, the giving of gifts, carnivals(parades) with floats, carolers who sing while going from house to house, the holiday feasts, and the church processions can all be traced back to the early Mesopotamians. 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With cries of "Jo Saturnalia!" the celebration would include masquerades in the streets, big festive meals, visiting friends, and the exchange of good-luck gifts called Strenae (lucky fruits). The Romans decked their halls with garlands of laurel and green trees lit with candles. Again the masters and slaves would exchange places. "Jo Saturnalia!" was a fun and festive time for the Romans, but the Christians thought it an abomination to honor the pagan god. The early Christians wanted to keep the birthday of their Christ child a solemn and religious holiday, not one of cheer and merriment as was the pagan Saturnalia. Some legends claim that the Christian "Christmas" celebration was invented to compete against the pagan celebrations of December. The 25th was not only sacred to the Romans but also the Persians whose religion Mithraism was one of Christianity's main rivals at that time. The Church eventually was successful in taking the merriment, lights, and gifts from the Saturanilia festival and bringing them to the celebration of Christmas. The exact day of the Christ child's birth has never been pinpointed. Traditions say that it has been celebrated since the year 98 AD. In 137 AD the Bishop of Rome ordered the birthday of the Christ Child celebrated as a solemn feast. In 350 AD another Bishop of Rome, Julius I, choose December 25th as the observance of Christmas. The birth of Jesus had a story: In Nazareth, a city of Galilee. The virgin's name was Mary was betrothed to Joseph. Before they came together, she was found with child of the Holy Spirit. Joseph her husband was minded to put her away secretly. While he thought about these things, Gabriel, an angel of the Lord appeared to him in a dream and told him did not be afraid to take Mary as wife. And Mary will bring forth a Son, and he shall call his name, Jesus, for he will save his people from their sins. 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